Demon Castle Tutorials - Usability Test [Was: Re: [Etoys] Demon Castle Tutorials for eToys]

[Milan Zimmermann]

Takashi,

Thanks for commenting, and I will send a few typo and formulation suggestions 
tomorrow. I will just use "old string" => "new string" format, if it's easier 
for you that I make changes in the projects and save, let me know.

Later, Milan

On 2006 October 23 11:51, Takashi Yamamiya wrote:
> Hi Milan,
>
> Thank you so much about the valuable testing!
>
> Milan Zimmermann wrote:
> > Hi Takashi,
> >
> > This weekend, we ran a usability test on your tutorial.
>
> Actually it was so fun to read it. I imagined how the girls respond,
> laugh, and sometimes complain ;) That's great! I really learned by
> that. I can't fix each issues now because I have to do another things,
> though. I promise that I comment about issues later, and make them
> better surely!
>
> > Beautiful stuff - please let me know if we can help. We noticed a few
> > typos and formulation potential changes - if you'd like, we can summarize
> > them.
>
> Also, please give me your suggestion about any words and expression
> anytime.
>
> Thanks,
> - Takashi