#11637 NORM 1.75-ha: RF Exposure Information card could use grammar improvements

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#11637: RF Exposure Information card could use grammar improvements
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 Reporter:  greenfeld              |                 Owner:                                   
     Type:  defect                 |                Status:  new                              
 Priority:  normal                 |             Milestone:  1.75-hardware                    
Component:  manufacturing process  |               Version:  Development build as of this date
 Keywords:                         |           Next_action:  diagnose                         
 Verified:  0                      |   Deployment_affected:                                   
Blockedby:                         |              Blocking:                                   
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 The RF Exposure Information card (HDCL2001010 3A) included with ramp units
 could use a few grammar improvements.

 It has:
  * A "*" modifier which doesn't seem to lead or mean anything.
  * Missing punctuation
  * At least one misspelled word ("poser {required to reach the network}")
  * A backwards apostrophe
  * Varying in-between sentence spacing (which admittedly could be poorly
 justified text on one side, and non-justified text on another).
  * And never explains what the installed EM113-MV is

 The grammar in general is not entirely bad; but could use improvements
 here & there.  And if there are any errors in the mandatory FCC statement
 as provided to us by the FCC, by all means keep them in there.

 Seen in a SKU 204 box of XO-1.75s.

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Ticket URL: <http://dev.laptop.org/ticket/11637>
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